On this day I unlaced my roots
let eyes shed their need
tears guild my touch / guide my touch
ripe moments
thought not enough
are enough
my sighs extend the autumn breeze
lift what is left
shift the weight of unspoken meaning
expecting / you
alongside
unburied
discovered
I hate hidden / hate
hidden / miss the lost
slender surprise / the silver trumpet assembles
our single strands dance into place on circular needles
rouse
so / this day breathes
and tomorrow
embryonic / fetal / sleeping
Poem and image by Jo Mariner
One of my new favorite poems by you JO!
“our single strands dance into place on circular needles”
YES!
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Beautiful imagery and really effective use of repetition and internal rhyming in this poem .
I find the line with ‘guilding’ and ‘guiding’ beautiful. An initial response to a poem which deserves to read many times.
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Thanks Barbara for noticing the internal sounds. I like these bits too. L. Jo
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