first fact fell like fat snow
made things slippery
I stayed cosy
then facts piled up
so I played with facts
threw fact-balls at my friends
then facts fell like sleet
standing up became hard
the slightest nudge sent me sliding
how strange I thought
fact — dangerous
I held on tight
until fact fell like ash
burning fragments
oily residue of destruction
this fact smeared me
and I rubbed hard to clean smudges
left when I brushed off fact
then fact / fact / fact
smacked me like a fist / fact
fact / fact / fact / woke me
fact
(in the dream snow or sleet or smuts or fists –but I knew it was fact)
fact is / fact remains
fact I watched from a safe distance
fact I belittled
fact I tried to rub away
Poem and photography by Jo Mariner
I really liked this, Jo, the snowy metaphor works really well. Unfortunately I couldn’t hear you speaking it, but even in silence I could hear this one clearly!
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Thanks Morag!
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I really like this poem Jo. A great and very clear analogy. You create stress and tension very well indeed – I can really relate to this poem!!!
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Thanks Barbara!!
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Hi Jo! I love this poem…Facts waking us up…What a great thing that would be…We can only hope for that awakening.
jonas
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Thanks Jonas. Good to hear from you.
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